The Sacrifice....(A Tale In 160 Characters)
By Pete Marshall
I travelled deep into her wretched heart
and staked my claim upon her will
I watched her screams whilst darkness danced
And prayed with friends that gathered still
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18 comments:
to me, sounds like marriage haha
ouch, kay. lol.
your 160 sounds like its got some bite pete...smiles. how bout a garlic necklace?
my 160 is up!
sounds scary - glad I do not sit in a foggy dark place while reading it..
Oh, creepy! Still, everlasting life... Nah, not worth it.
Excellent, Pete.
Awesome! This 160 has bite!
wow, this was rather chilling, peter! makes me glad i'm sitting in broad daylight as i read it ;)
i stopped by the one stop blog a while ago and read the most fabulous work about the strip and a limo...it was accredited to peter marshall. was it you?? if so, it was WONDERFUL!!
Amazing what can be said in only 160. Brilliant post and thanks for playing.
Wow, that's pretty dark but very good!
Here's mine: http://harrischanningauthor.blogspot.com
Whoooaa... that was chilling and cruel!!! But very good!!!
But who is the vampire? No, wait. You never did mention a vampire. What am I thinking?
Chilling...I literally got goosebumps reading this. The last line is the scariest of all.
HHMMMMMMM AND i THOUGHT MY EX WAS COLD lol
Fire Ants
Thanks For reading
interesting 160,
it does not sound like you.
mine is up,
simply click on my name to get to my blogger account. thank you.
I'm reading a Charlaine Harris series right now...She's good, but this was better :)
Good job, that was chilling!!
-C
Another amazing and very well written piece.
Christine
excellent, i really must try this out
That was wretched
ouch is right
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