Love Thy Neighbour
by pete marshall
I stared behind a wooden fence
that hid my face from neighbours eyes,
where in my house my love was spent
as dreams would take me back outside.
I stared upon the gap between
that caught my eye, her whitened thighs,
I saw her jump and hoped the hem
would lift up high and gently rise.
A sultry voice and bright red shoes
that danced a beat of wicked lies,
a sirens call on errant runs
where love would hide & I’d oblige.
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Today's wonderful image is by photographer Lauren Randolph, who's interview and picture prompt have formed this weeks One Shot Sunday, at One Stop Poetry
18 comments:
Wonderful write, Pete! I was waiting to see who whould be the first to peak beyond the fence, and you've done it so well! Still smiling.
Awesome write. Wish I grew up in that neighborhood. lol
I really like this Pete-- you've captured the photo and the notion of a sexy neighbor really well. xj
what a sultry look behind the fence...love this one dude.
too good...suburbia at its finest... so clever with that title, too..
This was fun and so accessible..right next door. How we all adore the girl or boy next door. You did well with this. I went to another dimension instead..outer space not inner.
ahhh, love thy neighbour... I dig this man.. nice
hot for neighbor...nice....the third stanza in particular as you played well with the words...
Nice write Pete...I noticed too that her thighs were rather white....bkm
heehe couldn't help but smile Pete ~ neat take ~ peeking over that fence ~ yes I liked them ... shoes too :) *wink* ~ Lib ~ loved it ~ @libithina
You can have the girl, Pete, I want the shoes! You men--always something better on the other side of the fence!
enjoyed this very much!
Nice piece, wondered who would go that route, beyond the fence to the house next door.
Good, smile-inducing, relatable piece.
What a unique viewpoint you chose for this poem and all presented in such tight form. Really great response to the picture - cheeky and oh so human.
nice one, pete
I see you spying there, in between the pickets :)
White thighs and siren calls, dangerous combo ;)
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