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Sunday, 5 September 2010

Dorothy....(A Tale in 160 Characters)


Dorothy
(A Tale in 160 Characters)

Her ruby heels whirled on bricks of gold
Whilst growls would make this Lion start
The Scarecrow lacked all kinds of thought
And Tin Man’s words would show no heart

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18 comments:

Monkey Man said...

Loved it. Off to Oz in 160. Thanks for playing with us, Pete.

Brian Miller said...

but even still they prevailed...smiles. nice 160 my friend...

joanny said...

Love magical places,,,, but they will soon learn the streets are not really lined with gold. Nice 160 Pete.

Joanny

moondustwriter said...

Ha very nice take on a beloved story
nice 160

Happy Sunday my friend

gautami tripathy said...

Beautifully done!

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n. davis rosback said...

cute...i like it :-)

Jingle said...

great tale...
Happy Sunday!


My 160 Entry

Pete Marshall said...

thanks monkey...i just so enjoy writing these

cheers bri...was fun this

you are so right joanny

thanks moonie...glad you liked

Pete Marshall said...

thanks monkey...i just so enjoy writing these

cheers bri...was fun this

you are so right joanny

thanks moonie...glad you liked

Pete Marshall said...

thanks guatami

cheers N...i like cute

hi jingle...thanks a lot..cheers pete

PattiKen said...

You are so darned clever. That was terrific.

Alice Audrey said...

The Wizard of Oz in 160 Character - impressive.

Christine said...

So much said in so few words. Brilliant!

Christine

Pete Marshall said...

thanks Patti, alice & Christine..enjoyed writing this..cheers pete

Caty said...

I love the spin on OZ...and in such few words. terrific :)

Victoria said...

Clever take on a classic. Great 160
Victoria

Pete Marshall said...

hi caty & victoria...thanks..loved this a lot myself too...cheers pete

Anonymous said...

Привет всем! Мне 25 лет и все жизнь я хожу с длинными волосами (до поясницы) и в послднее время мне очень хочется их обстричь до плеч! Они у меня очень густые и сильно вьются и мне может показаться на первый взгляд, что в случае в случае если они будут короткими я сумею их выпрямлять (сейчас не выходит)
Девушки, кто-нибудь обстригал длинные ворлосы, не пожалели?
Мужу все точно еще, подруги отговаривают...
Заранее всем спасибо!

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