tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post8029878647671925707..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: A Moment Framed: By Pete MarshallMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-11951322547369820402010-11-09T12:57:09.189+00:002010-11-09T12:57:09.189+00:00lol..... take your breath?? It if calls for you br...lol..... take your breath?? It if calls for you breath-taking, then such a thing is way beyond 'PERFECT'<br /><br />I'd love you to see this;<br /><br />http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/10/my-inspiration.htmlEddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18075343865053401543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-13003374195996803492010-11-08T17:08:39.894+00:002010-11-08T17:08:39.894+00:00thanks so much Pete for fixing my link ~ so enjoye...thanks so much Pete for fixing my link ~ so enjoyed taking part and reading everyones wonderful writes here ~ have a great week Pete ~ *heartsmiles* Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-11117550557561233012010-11-08T05:06:14.173+00:002010-11-08T05:06:14.173+00:00life is filled with sorrow and surrender - that ri...life is filled with sorrow and surrender - that rises again as new life form from the depths of the sea or the sacrifical fires...let us hold each other up to rise above any loss of life, or breath or need of growing into that soul we we born to be....passionate write Peter...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-75974173485582925572010-11-08T05:02:44.601+00:002010-11-08T05:02:44.601+00:00beautifully sad and nicely written, my friend.beautifully sad and nicely written, my friend.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-41750048504381147392010-11-08T03:06:34.194+00:002010-11-08T03:06:34.194+00:00"Where seaweed lays in scattered death"-..."Where seaweed lays in scattered death"--living near the water, this is so real. Really enjoyed it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11682590088361102336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-73646769748133144432010-11-07T23:48:36.819+00:002010-11-07T23:48:36.819+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Larryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290596151555223363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-24471831947802022042010-11-07T23:48:18.420+00:002010-11-07T23:48:18.420+00:00Most righteousMost righteousLarryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290596151555223363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-13545330546852384662010-11-07T23:29:51.650+00:002010-11-07T23:29:51.650+00:00Always a pleasure to read your poetry PeteAlways a pleasure to read your poetry PeteDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-721473392842951542010-11-07T22:56:30.272+00:002010-11-07T22:56:30.272+00:00There's such a lyrical quality to your writing...There's such a lyrical quality to your writing. The rhythm envelopes me in the scene gently leading from the first word to the very last. You never fail to take my breath away. Well done!Ranee Dillonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08673357492374295171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-31234523981176502152010-11-07T22:43:46.158+00:002010-11-07T22:43:46.158+00:00Pete, this is my favorite one so far. Rhyme and me...Pete, this is my favorite one so far. Rhyme and meter is really hard to pull off.<br /><br />I especially like the first two lines of the second stanza, the rhyme and the color imagery play off of each other really well.Marcus Goodyearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255781957722144278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-55999632347162543992010-11-07T20:26:41.895+00:002010-11-07T20:26:41.895+00:00thanks for all your comments...this poem dwells in...thanks for all your comments...this poem dwells in depression..welcome the waves to take my breath...refers to walking in to the sea and drowning herself..this is a poem fraught with the battle of depression...peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-5288760278771208022010-11-07T19:55:56.235+00:002010-11-07T19:55:56.235+00:00great take Pete on Andys pic ~ I got that isolatio...great take Pete on Andys pic ~ I got that isolation ~ loved the waves taking the breath ~libithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-34433604105069113972010-11-07T19:26:43.390+00:002010-11-07T19:26:43.390+00:00I can really visualise that moment in time. A wond...I can really visualise that moment in time. A wonderful post<br /><br />ChristineChristine Ramsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02633275896708261299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-75952960806336444342010-11-07T18:17:34.481+00:002010-11-07T18:17:34.481+00:00No words, it's gorgeous.
The photograph itse...No words, it's gorgeous. <br /><br />The photograph itself is haunting, can't wait to see what the others make of it.<br /><br />Thanks Pete.Awdureshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01732096950705627138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-64261052963336704862010-11-07T18:12:04.687+00:002010-11-07T18:12:04.687+00:00this feels good
like a good back massagethis feels good<br />like a good back massageAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-45358959190719158922010-11-07T17:43:28.795+00:002010-11-07T17:43:28.795+00:00Sadness in the moment, yet there's acceptance....Sadness in the moment, yet there's acceptance. Love the images, beautifully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-34168416272386233502010-11-07T17:33:34.420+00:002010-11-07T17:33:34.420+00:00I like how your poem has a nice, flowing rhythm to...I like how your poem has a nice, flowing rhythm to it. The words are beautiful, and they fit so well together.Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16063109274631761935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-77349484505805364862010-11-07T17:30:53.238+00:002010-11-07T17:30:53.238+00:00Your poem pulls at the undercurrents of lonely dep...Your poem pulls at the undercurrents of lonely depicted in the photo--framed, like your "withered mind." Great poem. Blessing.Melissa Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16024400805290277282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-15433049961227732552010-11-07T17:27:39.778+00:002010-11-07T17:27:39.778+00:00Excellent job of echoing between the photo and the...Excellent job of echoing between the photo and the poem. The image is the message and vice versa. Liked it a lot.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-6390675682600625952010-11-07T15:45:59.759+00:002010-11-07T15:45:59.759+00:00such a peaceful rhythm for a melancholy piece. T...such a peaceful rhythm for a melancholy piece. Terrific write for this photo.Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-13440259593551025172010-11-07T15:40:09.779+00:002010-11-07T15:40:09.779+00:00This is WOW good! I felt breathless reading it.This is WOW good! I felt breathless reading it.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-40455836083025861242010-11-07T15:29:57.148+00:002010-11-07T15:29:57.148+00:00welcome the waves to take your breath..this was st...welcome the waves to take your breath..this was strong pete<br />sounds like an arrival after a tough journeyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-54551957467560473812010-11-07T14:52:24.180+00:002010-11-07T14:52:24.180+00:00"That wants no more to play your games" ..."That wants no more to play your games" that line for me was like a knock-out punch in this gem. Nice write!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-130697068649283292010-11-07T14:34:05.603+00:002010-11-07T14:34:05.603+00:00Your words draw well on the photo, creating an ima...Your words draw well on the photo, creating an image beyond it that wraps well around.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-30078258197628841322010-11-07T14:32:34.782+00:002010-11-07T14:32:34.782+00:00mmmhmmmm.... perfectly placed...
a melancholy pla...mmmhmmmm.... perfectly placed...<br /><br />a melancholy place leading to a peace of mind.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.com