tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post7360097594995957450..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: The Lovers: A Poem From The Darkened Tales CollectionMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-44232588327510682922010-07-22T00:36:23.616+01:002010-07-22T00:36:23.616+01:00devilishly creepy! a great write!
http://mairmusic...devilishly creepy! a great write!<br />http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-11919170881591305152010-07-20T11:45:01.214+01:002010-07-20T11:45:01.214+01:00Nicely written :D and i like the way you portrayed...Nicely written :D and i like the way you portrayed out the scenes ;D thank for sharing!^^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-20164040751517838572010-07-17T16:00:04.964+01:002010-07-17T16:00:04.964+01:00Just joined your google follow feed ...
:)Just joined your google follow feed ...<br />:)The Musehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09698847569200418376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-55379478603469323992010-07-16T16:32:35.983+01:002010-07-16T16:32:35.983+01:00Turning on the light...
No, I shall turn it off.
A...Turning on the light...<br />No, I shall turn it off.<br />And use my flashlight.<br />And re-read this.<br /><br />OOOO!<br /><br />Ok Light back on!<br /><br />Golly!The Musehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09698847569200418376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-42526104214121658752010-07-15T20:14:40.205+01:002010-07-15T20:14:40.205+01:00So beautiful and then the swift and powerful turn,...So beautiful and then the swift and powerful turn, <br />'You scoured my eyes with fists of sand', great.Twilarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058094993301744328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-18796268229719923302010-07-15T13:19:29.942+01:002010-07-15T13:19:29.942+01:00rich with imagery and longing.
i enjoyed this very...rich with imagery and longing.<br />i enjoyed this very much.<br /><br />smiles,Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-5714813353185198072010-07-15T09:17:32.865+01:002010-07-15T09:17:32.865+01:00thank you for all your wonderful comments which i ...thank you for all your wonderful comments which i have thoroughly enjoyed reading....the pain of a one night stand and the gambles we take..spot on!!! cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-56067833656345820482010-07-15T08:24:06.326+01:002010-07-15T08:24:06.326+01:00First, sensuous. Then, passionate. And then, dark ...First, sensuous. Then, passionate. And then, dark and eerie!<br />Me llllikes!!! :)<br />A story well-put! <br /><br />I hope the guy's eyes are alright though... what with all that sand ;-)<br />But I bet she'll find him irresistible, and will be back again.. <br /><br />Have a great week!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-85261470815686194902010-07-15T03:04:03.134+01:002010-07-15T03:04:03.134+01:00Without a doubt: a dark, dark tale. Well crafted.Without a doubt: a dark, dark tale. Well crafted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-62485614070034802122010-07-15T02:38:29.839+01:002010-07-15T02:38:29.839+01:00I appreciate your use of rhythm and sound. Intense...I appreciate your use of rhythm and sound. Intense images and a surprising end. Powerful use of language. - BillPastor Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06104455258922539567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-68894253684406718972010-07-15T01:53:43.678+01:002010-07-15T01:53:43.678+01:00Pete:
C'est la vie, pleasure and pain are com...Pete:<br /><br />C'est la vie, pleasure and pain are companions, when one is awake the other is asleep in your bed.<br /><br />Loved the power and intensity of this darkened tale. <br /><br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-35172629432553160672010-07-14T22:14:04.517+01:002010-07-14T22:14:04.517+01:00Wow, hot passion and cold indifference! The danger...Wow, hot passion and cold indifference! The dangers of a one-night stand? Well done.<br /><br />Thanks for your visit and comments over at my place!PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-88760559041940207452010-07-14T20:19:15.213+01:002010-07-14T20:19:15.213+01:00http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010...http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/14/outstanding-poetry-communities-to-share/<br /><br />check out a post about poetry communities,<br />have fun exploring...<br />Cheers!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-14957883816107054382010-07-14T19:27:16.185+01:002010-07-14T19:27:16.185+01:00"our pupils spoke in whispered stares" t..."our pupils spoke in whispered stares" that's the most romantic line I've read in awhile! The ending now that had to hurt! Great writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-31958025912008490432010-07-14T18:46:45.492+01:002010-07-14T18:46:45.492+01:00when people leave, they don't just go:
They t...when people leave, they don't just go:<br /><br />They take space with them and create a vacuum that sucks you in.<br /><br />now to find those bandages...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-35803896886349525472010-07-14T17:58:55.932+01:002010-07-14T17:58:55.932+01:00That one is pretty intense...there are spiders tha...That one is pretty intense...there are spiders that eat their lover after the act..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-68316865738936554532010-07-14T17:10:38.419+01:002010-07-14T17:10:38.419+01:00Ouch, the eyes, they bleed!! Nice one, Mr. Marshal...Ouch, the eyes, they bleed!! Nice one, Mr. Marshall! Sorry I couldn't contribute anything today; out of brain-juice lately. Shall use a bendy straw to suck some out from a zombie's head.heatblasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09815427968211010531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-17795334465652306372010-07-14T16:47:14.900+01:002010-07-14T16:47:14.900+01:00I'm not familiar with your Darkened Tales or p...I'm not familiar with your Darkened Tales or perhaps that last bit wouldn't have grabbed me so. Not your typical tale of getting dumped after lovemaking! I love it!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-90413591721806924962010-07-14T16:36:50.941+01:002010-07-14T16:36:50.941+01:00OH, the charm of the undead...:) She charmed him...OH, the charm of the undead...:) She charmed him until she got him where she wanted him. Hmmm...not unlike the living either I guess. Great poem!Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-90867749993384952602010-07-14T16:06:46.539+01:002010-07-14T16:06:46.539+01:00the sensuality in this poem is way beyond beautifu...the sensuality in this poem is way beyond beautiful Pete! reread it many times already! cheers my friend..very well written :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-4213365880812869012010-07-14T14:49:19.618+01:002010-07-14T14:49:19.618+01:00hot and steamy
untilhot and steamy <br />untilSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-13448364117610782482010-07-14T14:07:44.421+01:002010-07-14T14:07:44.421+01:00i loved reading it in my mind .. kind of humming a...i loved reading it in my mind .. kind of humming a song ... that makes me wonder what if some one really sang this 1 what a great song it would make !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-36695499812572759492010-07-14T13:35:20.133+01:002010-07-14T13:35:20.133+01:00Sensual and nice :)Sensual and nice :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-88019621043136403412010-07-14T11:30:18.234+01:002010-07-14T11:30:18.234+01:00Wow, Pete. I really felt sorry for the man. He mus...Wow, Pete. I really felt sorry for the man. He must have had such a shock. You really are a talented poet.<br /><br />ChristineChristine Ramsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02633275896708261299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-66456990877071415242010-07-14T06:19:32.273+01:002010-07-14T06:19:32.273+01:00Oh, the verse well done... Pete, you are a master ...Oh, the verse well done... Pete, you are a master at this type of writing...<br /><br />Me, well I am afraid of my own shadow - I would not let that woman near me...<br /><br />great read...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.com