tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post5414298910421198674..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: Alone In Her Dreams: A Poem Of Love UnknownMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-22944744834217784802011-05-21T16:15:39.595+01:002011-05-21T16:15:39.595+01:00Beautifully written, illustrating the expression o...Beautifully written, illustrating the expression of "longing"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-71014505953477594112011-05-21T04:09:15.007+01:002011-05-21T04:09:15.007+01:00Indeed it is sad, but a beautiful write!Indeed it is sad, but a beautiful write!Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-33182786295031298822011-05-21T04:01:22.840+01:002011-05-21T04:01:22.840+01:00This left me feeling so sad, Pete. There are momen...This left me feeling so sad, Pete. There are moments when we do feel our aloneness and when we question the illusions/myths we create. But hopefully we find the answers with the one we love.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/05/21/loves-colors/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-51616368134321776772011-05-20T21:55:56.631+01:002011-05-20T21:55:56.631+01:00Know I've read this one before but how come I ...Know I've read this one before but how come I didn't comment? Oh well..Pete, a sad take on how love dies, captured the feeling in your lines perfectly. Still living in hope ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-1445569171008781022011-05-20T20:27:26.992+01:002011-05-20T20:27:26.992+01:00I find this quite sad.
You captured together, but...I find this quite sad.<br /><br />You captured together, but alone beautifully.<br /><br />Splendid!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-81589506748620970302011-05-20T17:47:26.133+01:002011-05-20T17:47:26.133+01:00wow!
'our once flowering bed now ravaged by t...wow! <br />'our once flowering bed now ravaged by thorns'<br /><br />got me right in the heart with this line.<br /><br />love it!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-7401088565551816842011-05-20T16:57:18.019+01:002011-05-20T16:57:18.019+01:00"my head lays in nettles my limbs upon weeds
..."my head lays in nettles my limbs upon weeds<br />and still she sleeps alone in her dreams..."<br /><br />What an image of love's demise!<br /><br />Excellent work, with perfect meter that never detracts from the subtlety of words and image.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-85063983954399393792011-05-20T14:13:16.001+01:002011-05-20T14:13:16.001+01:00nice...thanks for linking in brother...and love to...nice...thanks for linking in brother...and love to watch he sleep and breathe...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-16823065510421709372011-05-20T13:00:57.247+01:002011-05-20T13:00:57.247+01:00layered. after reading several times, first time g...layered. after reading several times, first time got caught up in scanning with fingers your neat almost but not quite meter :)<br /><br />like the others, I read the saddness. . .but then, hidden within, feelings begin. . .<br /><br />a simplicity. who hasn't lay awake and pondered as the other lays sleeping peaefully? great job, pete!<br /><br />MontyMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-33476248880187446892011-05-20T12:33:57.050+01:002011-05-20T12:33:57.050+01:00reading this for the third time now...wow back in ...reading this for the third time now...wow back in july - almost a year ago - can't believe how things have changed - a sad but beautiful poem pete. you are good with expressing emotionsClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-82857818586053369942010-08-23T13:12:00.918+01:002010-08-23T13:12:00.918+01:00hi all i seemed to have overlooked the wonderful c...hi all i seemed to have overlooked the wonderful comments on this piece..thanks all PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-41051814599036722492010-08-22T16:26:48.908+01:002010-08-22T16:26:48.908+01:00I like this one Pete. It is beautifully crafted.I like this one Pete. It is beautifully crafted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-60458266546758835452010-07-24T19:37:42.752+01:002010-07-24T19:37:42.752+01:00lovely n nice poem go on with the same spiritlovely n nice poem go on with the same spiritAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-89329932081978578482010-07-23T14:08:46.376+01:002010-07-23T14:08:46.376+01:00I watch her breathe she murmurs she moans
There ar...<em>I watch her breathe she murmurs she moans<br />There are two in this bed but one is alone</em><br /><br />Wow, sad, Pete. Good work, though.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my site as well.<br /><br />Cheers mate!<br /><br />Rhyme on!<br /><br />Tim Keeton<br /><a href="http://undeadpoets.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">(Undead)Poet</a> / Wizard / Teller-of-talesTim Keetonhttp://timkeeton.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-78339719356932217772010-07-23T11:12:32.136+01:002010-07-23T11:12:32.136+01:00So beautifully written, and it is such a sad senti...So beautifully written, and it is such a sad sentiment you've written about. I really love it. <br /><br />My favorite line is:<br />"There are two in this bed but one is alone"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-90636908363598831952010-07-23T03:41:26.124+01:002010-07-23T03:41:26.124+01:00Wow, this is fantastic! "Our once flowering b...Wow, this is fantastic! "Our once flowering bed now ravaged by thorns" Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-91613585361278769632010-07-23T02:19:12.938+01:002010-07-23T02:19:12.938+01:00Tears! You have ravaged my poor heart, Pete. Oh my...Tears! You have ravaged my poor heart, Pete. Oh my, shows you have poemed true. Well structured, well considered, finely tuned. Wonderful. Thank you!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-4193358715384214622010-07-23T02:03:02.997+01:002010-07-23T02:03:02.997+01:00this is sad but well done, together but so far apa...this is sad but well done, together but so far apart, the worst kind of lonliness, wow, you are good!!thanks<br />alanalanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13248003429354862564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-67215816337507999922010-07-22T22:37:58.656+01:002010-07-22T22:37:58.656+01:00pete that was beautiful, u are very talented :)pete that was beautiful, u are very talented :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-41313303267619330912010-07-22T20:52:54.383+01:002010-07-22T20:52:54.383+01:00hi to you all and a big thankyou for commenting on...hi to you all and a big thankyou for commenting on this poem...cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-65599974081885422142010-07-22T19:07:45.160+01:002010-07-22T19:07:45.160+01:00Beautiful poem about love...I hope she draws him i...Beautiful poem about love...I hope she draws him into her dreams very soon...I hate to see him cry. Well done. HeartspellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-14788061486761714262010-07-22T19:01:45.471+01:002010-07-22T19:01:45.471+01:00Hi again Pete!
I'm glad you managed to link up...Hi again Pete!<br />I'm glad you managed to link up at my blog - and I feel exceedingly honored!<br />..and I had to read your fantastic poem again - now that I'm already here...<br /><br />Have a lovely evening!<br />ClaudiaClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-75313847565949256822010-07-22T15:45:44.489+01:002010-07-22T15:45:44.489+01:00fantastic.this sound to me like a dramatic monolog...fantastic.this sound to me like a dramatic monologue. a sad tale of lost love. i specially liked the flow of imagery in this poem.Moryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-28996602176518350302010-07-22T14:12:38.330+01:002010-07-22T14:12:38.330+01:00Nice stuff Pete, great poem. And the Blog's lo...Nice stuff Pete, great poem. And the Blog's looking flash! Cheers for the visit, too.<br /><br />Warmest salad<br /><br />LukeLuke Praterhttp://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-51357725608955759292010-07-22T14:09:19.565+01:002010-07-22T14:09:19.565+01:00So sad to read, I can feel your lonliness. Nice us...So sad to read, I can feel your lonliness. Nice use of imagery with thorns and roses etc. glad I found you on Jingles Rally!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com