tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post4240894075281545739..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: Hope No More: poetry by pete marshallMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger53125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-67219851624051092422011-04-17T03:45:54.286+01:002011-04-17T03:45:54.286+01:00Love this line "where words were mixed with s...Love this line "where words were mixed with scattered doubts". Great imagery in these lines. I can see it and feel it.M D Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07888381038040832153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-82155476341524308702011-04-16T19:31:55.653+01:002011-04-16T19:31:55.653+01:00very well written as is most of the things I have ...very well written as is most of the things I have read of yoursCharlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-26822347762423535512011-04-16T19:31:25.353+01:002011-04-16T19:31:25.353+01:00very well written as is most of the things I have ...very well written as is most of the things I have read of yoursCharlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-40910872844670691722011-04-15T21:43:13.965+01:002011-04-15T21:43:13.965+01:00Very atmospheric and loved the way it all tied up ...Very atmospheric and loved the way it all tied up in the last verseLucy Fur Leapshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18202434441294577277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-68389381916259503852011-04-15T20:03:19.060+01:002011-04-15T20:03:19.060+01:00Very nice one shot indeed, Pete. Really enjoyed t...Very nice one shot indeed, Pete. Really enjoyed the perfect flow of this piece. The last two lines dug deep and hit the bittersweet spot we like to keep hidden. Thanks for not being afraid to hit us where it hurts<br />Thanks for thisD.C. Lutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-61426210953335860162011-04-15T15:51:02.587+01:002011-04-15T15:51:02.587+01:00Somehow (why) the flow of your quatrains here remi...Somehow (why) the flow of your quatrains here reminds me of Poe-- great write & fun to read out loud.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-17915722500683589312011-04-15T07:18:04.942+01:002011-04-15T07:18:04.942+01:00to not hope anymore is sad. and ur words echo it s...to not hope anymore is sad. and ur words echo it so, Pete! the first verse itself gets out the emotions! wonderful. back to Oneshot hop after awhile, planning to read as much as I can esp since I've no hopes of writing daily this summer :)<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/hope/" rel="nofollow">My One Shot Wednesday</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-19418471640831323152011-04-14T23:46:16.081+01:002011-04-14T23:46:16.081+01:00Pete, this actually hurts. It's also so true f...Pete, this actually hurts. It's also so true for so many. Poignant write!Joannahttp://intostillness.wordpress.com/2011/04/13/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-%E2%80%93-week-41/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-15584119224762413202011-04-14T13:08:49.351+01:002011-04-14T13:08:49.351+01:00heart-wrenching! but beautifully written. amazing!...heart-wrenching! but beautifully written. amazing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-50704768442925143392011-04-14T05:37:55.307+01:002011-04-14T05:37:55.307+01:00Self-indulgence is the existential molasses of sub...Self-indulgence is the existential molasses of subjectivity.<br /><br />OneLove--Tiger WindwalkerBig Sur Blogispherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-29751691511948360482011-04-14T04:42:01.839+01:002011-04-14T04:42:01.839+01:00some great lines in this one, especially the secon...some great lines in this one, especially the second and third stanza... I always seem to think rhyme as "old & sweet", yours was pure mod grit... wonderful~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-16270241491385679792011-04-14T01:16:32.796+01:002011-04-14T01:16:32.796+01:00Descriptive,thoughtful and sad. Life is short.Descriptive,thoughtful and sad. Life is short.Lindahttp://www.roses2rainbows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-9381738390050176442011-04-13T21:57:24.510+01:002011-04-13T21:57:24.510+01:00A memorable and intelligent write, which has so ma...A memorable and intelligent write, which has so many loved lines that I'm finding it hard not to feel envious of your talent. It reads as a very authentic and perceptive poem.<br />Thank you. James.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-3441660692548944012011-04-13T18:14:26.556+01:002011-04-13T18:14:26.556+01:00Your feelings of lost hope are expressed so vividl...Your feelings of lost hope are expressed so vividly in this poem. A fantastic piece.Christine Ramsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02633275896708261299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-83160242706803463462011-04-13T16:54:11.307+01:002011-04-13T16:54:11.307+01:00sometimes we need to remember to forget
great wri...sometimes we need to remember to forget<br /><br />great write Pete...flows with our lives<br /><br />Peace, hp<br /><br />thanks for stopping by, mateknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-24974515333554176882011-04-13T16:09:38.411+01:002011-04-13T16:09:38.411+01:00Let's go knock back a few pints and wring this...Let's go knock back a few pints and wring this out for you, Pete!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-88754402052179565312011-04-13T15:49:26.560+01:002011-04-13T15:49:26.560+01:00Raw and emotional. You packed a punch with this o...Raw and emotional. You packed a punch with this one Pete. Thank you for sharing.Corbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168756186612658336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-12951812531785402032011-04-13T15:47:38.625+01:002011-04-13T15:47:38.625+01:00Hope, you didnt loose the grip on that hope comple...Hope, you didnt loose the grip on that hope completely..the only thing that keeps one alive thru the darkest night at times.budh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-35310279558103203092011-04-13T15:47:29.111+01:002011-04-13T15:47:29.111+01:00Superb imagery. You really bring out the emotion.Superb imagery. You really bring out the emotion.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-59415165144005041712011-04-13T14:35:32.959+01:002011-04-13T14:35:32.959+01:00Stopping by from One Shot. Beautiful.Stopping by from One Shot. Beautiful.Debra Gray-Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836657468924341727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-23360347474252676852011-04-13T14:18:58.374+01:002011-04-13T14:18:58.374+01:00Sad but amazing. I love the opening lines and you...Sad but amazing. I love the opening lines and your imagery makes me feel I rode the wave too.Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-46262961147736957652011-04-13T13:01:44.935+01:002011-04-13T13:01:44.935+01:00"Hope was blown through open doors
across the..."Hope was blown through open doors<br />across the green beyond the street<br />to fall amongst the rubbish bins<br />where foxes fought for scraps to eat."<br /><br />Pete, this flows so nicely. Wonderful word picture...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-65993187289511737072011-04-13T11:36:38.821+01:002011-04-13T11:36:38.821+01:00Sad but simply beautiful!Sad but simply beautiful!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-66408082855982761052011-04-13T11:03:39.436+01:002011-04-13T11:03:39.436+01:00A sad note but very powerful!
The image your words...A sad note but very powerful!<br />The image your words painted was so vivid and clear!<br /><br />We all have walked along this shore.. isn't it?<br />This is one brilliant write :)<br /><br />Many Hugs xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-41292044415036038922011-04-13T05:21:00.205+01:002011-04-13T05:21:00.205+01:00thats so....so bloody bang on..pardon my language....thats so....so bloody bang on..pardon my language...its sad but it doesnt let me feel sorry for you...like losing hope but a raw anger wanting to fling those books strewn across the floor at something..somebody...<br /><br />beautifully beautifully expressed.Sonika Uppalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263821952822391180noreply@blogger.com