tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post3948116240747161175..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: Ruined: A poem by pete marshallMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-5404377395055911892011-07-16T23:40:10.376+01:002011-07-16T23:40:10.376+01:00liked the words loved the graphic xxjen just calle...liked the words loved the graphic xxjen just called by xxjenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-21951448567901571352011-07-15T16:38:40.796+01:002011-07-15T16:38:40.796+01:00Its such a beautiful painting... with your words.....Its such a beautiful painting... with your words... I loved it so much... <br />thanks for sharing...<br />I am surprised why so many good people are leaving... OSP. Its sad... Hope things work out good for you my friend.<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-50789965339233655662011-07-14T21:54:46.659+01:002011-07-14T21:54:46.659+01:00Lyrical, lucid, magical, medieval. The photo surel...Lyrical, lucid, magical, medieval. The photo surely must have been an afterthought.xmatmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13860180211065089472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-32552769702917830912011-07-14T19:58:37.207+01:002011-07-14T19:58:37.207+01:00Excellent!Excellent!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-21437308931795251962011-07-13T22:22:52.135+01:002011-07-13T22:22:52.135+01:00You did justice to this amazing photograph, Pete.....You did justice to this amazing photograph, Pete.. <br />If words could kill, then I almost died reading this one... every line in your poem was intense, and a punch by itself! <br /><br />It sure is sad to see you leave OSP.. but that certainly won't stop me from reading your amazing poems.. will it now!? :)<br /><br />Best wishes for everything, my friend..Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-86607589551830077992011-07-13T19:12:50.414+01:002011-07-13T19:12:50.414+01:00lotsaluv your way pete and great and deep poem...m...lotsaluv your way pete and great and deep poem...made me almost cry again..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-5237364089413965842011-07-13T16:15:00.679+01:002011-07-13T16:15:00.679+01:00Beautifully nostalgic..Beautifully nostalgic..budh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-31513487918408340932011-07-13T12:55:01.726+01:002011-07-13T12:55:01.726+01:00Hey Pete,
I don't post comments that often no...Hey Pete,<br /><br />I don't post comments that often nowadays, but I still read your stuff regularly, and your style remains both unique and solidly strong. This one was a nice one for sure.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-78521543814435140282011-07-13T12:41:21.564+01:002011-07-13T12:41:21.564+01:00Wonderful work.
Thanks Pete.Wonderful work.<br /><br />Thanks Pete.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-73317034667575406332011-07-13T04:52:03.824+01:002011-07-13T04:52:03.824+01:00I love this kind of condensed poem where less is d...I love this kind of condensed poem where less is definately more. You have told many stories within this small piece!Elizabeth Younghttp://gardengatewares.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-73549294735763509392011-07-13T03:42:31.046+01:002011-07-13T03:42:31.046+01:00I didn't get to know you well, but I thank you...I didn't get to know you well, but I thank you for all you did to make OSP what it is. I've had some wonderful time here. And, this poem starts out running and doesn't stop. I can't even pick out a favorite line because the whole thing is perfect :) Best wishes to you in all your endeavors.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-19164110646695773522011-07-13T03:34:59.789+01:002011-07-13T03:34:59.789+01:00Great description in your words.Great description in your words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-7958193502930972102011-07-13T01:43:17.623+01:002011-07-13T01:43:17.623+01:00beautiful! i am deeply saddened by the end of OSP,...beautiful! i am deeply saddened by the end of OSP, but i wish you well with your book and future. thank you so much for all you did at One Stop Poetry!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-44073080081014980542011-07-13T00:01:44.769+01:002011-07-13T00:01:44.769+01:00Hey man! Nice to see ya! here for the cup final? d...Hey man! Nice to see ya! here for the cup final? dig it all, man, dig your service to the community of poet bloggers<br /><br />peace, see you on FB etc?Luke Praternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-38077142930191329912011-07-12T23:38:25.952+01:002011-07-12T23:38:25.952+01:00Thanks for sharing your One Shot!Thanks for sharing your One Shot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-3265677957873442302011-07-12T23:30:43.959+01:002011-07-12T23:30:43.959+01:00beautiful piece indeed... such a soft vibrant pict...beautiful piece indeed... such a soft vibrant picture of words.. greatness!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-27258810410891005332011-07-12T23:19:35.713+01:002011-07-12T23:19:35.713+01:002nd attempt to post comment. Reminds me of my UK ...2nd attempt to post comment. Reminds me of my UK trip and many visits to abbies and castles throughout. Thanks for sharing!jackie dicknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-62656004104444141312011-07-12T23:01:11.320+01:002011-07-12T23:01:11.320+01:00you got it in spades and though i already commente...you got it in spades and though i already commented just wanted you to know you are loved...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-51522505184392988742011-07-12T17:04:07.565+01:002011-07-12T17:04:07.565+01:00I am awed by this!
walk the pastI am awed by this!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/07/walk-past.html" rel="nofollow">walk the past</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-5808539182312129282011-07-11T21:20:34.128+01:002011-07-11T21:20:34.128+01:00wonderfully written piece! perfect for the image
t...wonderfully written piece! perfect for the image<br />thank you Pete!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-51712202399867888152011-07-11T14:40:02.787+01:002011-07-11T14:40:02.787+01:00I love how the rhymes twine through the lines :)I love how the rhymes twine through the lines :)Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-55590852139302996332011-07-11T04:34:16.450+01:002011-07-11T04:34:16.450+01:00Wow... excellent write. Love the depth within you...Wow... excellent write. Love the depth within your imagery. Fantastic.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-18451066699111823642011-07-11T03:46:15.299+01:002011-07-11T03:46:15.299+01:00another winner, I am not surprised and hope we wil...another winner, I am not surprised and hope we will still get to read your work...a book, did I hear? I'll buy it (a signed copy that is - lol ;)Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-35218951705021490652011-07-11T02:29:54.983+01:002011-07-11T02:29:54.983+01:00This is an excellent example of your work, natural...This is an excellent example of your work, natural, unforced rhyme with a strong message. This has to be a hard time for you all. You will be missed, both individually, and as a team who did so much to encourage others. <br /><br />Thanks for everything, Pete.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-84352241890550261292011-07-11T01:51:07.802+01:002011-07-11T01:51:07.802+01:00A small piece about a rich ruined world in lines t...A small piece about a rich ruined world in lines that beat and sing as always from you, Pete! But I do love the last lines that haunt with your imagery. Thanks for sharing your inimitable beat and the poems you draw from the heart. While I'm sad to know you're leaving, I let you go with hopes of meeting you again and wishes for the best wherever you're going from here.Alegria Imperialnoreply@blogger.com