tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post1154676712342514112..comments2023-07-09T15:24:09.491+01:00Comments on Pete Marshall: The Pier: A Poem by Pete MarshallMarshyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comBlogger60125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-48798096591297823332010-10-09T16:22:14.010+01:002010-10-09T16:22:14.010+01:00as lovers kissed a mile goodbye... WOWzers. Nice w...as lovers kissed a mile goodbye... WOWzers. Nice write Pete. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-46614849254246687312010-10-03T21:02:04.066+01:002010-10-03T21:02:04.066+01:00Oo I almost said I've been there! Really enjoy...Oo I almost said I've been there! Really enjoyed it, you took me there and told me a great vibrant story ;) Thinking I must be doing something wrong now, where do you get time to do everything lol xxxxDoubtfulpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03145417405043497527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-44954453314668738932010-10-02T15:27:55.623+01:002010-10-02T15:27:55.623+01:00have been reading your poems from wordpress.
its ...have been reading your poems from wordpress.<br /><br />its an outstanding poem pete. very beautiful.<br /><br />trishaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-48372824966028586432010-10-01T18:21:02.230+01:002010-10-01T18:21:02.230+01:00I feel so at home with this poem as I spend many a...I feel so at home with this poem as I spend many an hour on the pier here in Eastbourne. The way you describe the wooden planks which have been walked on by so many is really vivid. Brilliant work as always.<br /><br />ChristineChristine Ramsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02633275896708261299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-42909997615839496672010-10-01T01:15:25.977+01:002010-10-01T01:15:25.977+01:00That was nice!! I felt like I was there!!That was nice!! I felt like I was there!!Cindybrownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12991336185986473331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-66699222674365173842010-09-30T22:49:51.938+01:002010-09-30T22:49:51.938+01:00Amazing description...felt as if I was there...you...Amazing description...felt as if I was there...you are such a wonderfulpoet my friend xAmandahttp://buttercup600.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-49638651325699186442010-09-30T22:46:41.559+01:002010-09-30T22:46:41.559+01:00venturing back into the world of words...must say ...venturing back into the world of words...must say i was pleased to be able to read your work, pete. history is a fascinating subject and to breathe even more life into its ancient bones, is more thrilling...<br />i am sure you have heard bravo, but i have to add one more!The Musehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09698847569200418376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-75343234535572378482010-09-30T21:47:18.832+01:002010-09-30T21:47:18.832+01:00cheers shashi...i like the lines you picked
thank...cheers shashi...i like the lines you picked<br /><br />thanks bill..they are a wonderful, walk..theres a sense of freedom whilst still being intouch..<br /><br />thanks john..very perceptiveMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-69449493739424314652010-09-30T21:31:29.745+01:002010-09-30T21:31:29.745+01:00cheers belinda...yes it is
thanks mama...
cheers...cheers belinda...yes it is<br /><br />thanks mama...<br /><br />cheers asobime...thats a compliment<br /><br />hi cm...hope you enjoyed the study<br /><br />cheers teressa...the pier stand just before the mouth of the thames as it enters the north sea..glad you liked londonMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-28850244245471888482010-09-30T21:20:36.674+01:002010-09-30T21:20:36.674+01:00thanks firefly...then a job done good..cheers
che...thanks firefly...then a job done good..cheers<br /><br />cheers nessa...i suppose it could be viewed that way..with the history associated...and in the past there was an amazing ghost train that used to run at the end..until the ship ploughed through it one night...Marshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-34925492967029595182010-09-30T21:14:47.430+01:002010-09-30T21:14:47.430+01:00thanks leo...the rain striking your face can be re...thanks leo...the rain striking your face can be refreshing, awakening and painful...<br /><br />cheers desert rose...great photo that captures it so well<br /><br />thanks claudia..glad you liked it<br /><br />cheers steven..yes it is an amazing placeMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-14671417800124835512010-09-30T21:00:27.650+01:002010-09-30T21:00:27.650+01:00cheers tripathy...thanks for commenting
thanks he...cheers tripathy...thanks for commenting<br /><br />thanks heartspell..yes it is a great place to be at times<br /><br />cheers murk...i like the word motivated<br /><br />cheers eric....mind you you can easily walk off the end..re the lack of barriers.....Marshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-51349338996124734452010-09-30T20:54:13.677+01:002010-09-30T20:54:13.677+01:00hi wildrose..chase me off the pier..lol
cheers bo...hi wildrose..chase me off the pier..lol<br /><br />cheers boonie...<br /><br />hi alec...always a pleasure to see you around..like that "took me all the way"...<br /><br />thanks river....Marshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-75799136873328421732010-09-30T20:50:42.489+01:002010-09-30T20:50:42.489+01:00cheers beachanny...your comments really lift me..t...cheers beachanny...your comments really lift me..thanks my friend<br /><br />thanks nick...i appreciate that..<br /><br />thanks talon....thats a great comment about gift wrapping it<br /><br />cheers haisleyMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-45425361931865287042010-09-30T20:40:09.252+01:002010-09-30T20:40:09.252+01:00hi maureen..to know the area would make the line &...hi maureen..to know the area would make the line "boats would rise" more significant...southend pier is on an estuary and when the tide is out it is just mud flats that the boats sit on!!!!!<br /><br />cheers alexMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-78369370988339183882010-09-30T20:36:30.220+01:002010-09-30T20:36:30.220+01:00cheers moonie...masterpiece..like that my friend
...cheers moonie...masterpiece..like that my friend<br /><br />cheers dustus...it was a good write for me...ta mate<br /><br />thanks carrie...am glad you enjoyed itMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-39123927831724508962010-09-30T20:34:40.241+01:002010-09-30T20:34:40.241+01:00cheers bri....i appreciate your kind words
hi bkm...cheers bri....i appreciate your kind words<br /><br />hi bkm...many thanks..yes it is so alive!<br /><br />cheers suzicate..that was a wonderful commentMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-13449879185132654002010-09-30T20:16:07.853+01:002010-09-30T20:16:07.853+01:00cheers tuberider...yep its massive...and just keep...cheers tuberider...yep its massive...and just keeps going..makes sundays walking so refreshing...a mile out to sea..the wind is amazing...really does blow away the cobwebs<br /><br />hi steve...thanks i appreciate that wonderful comment..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-40572653859329668342010-09-30T20:14:20.855+01:002010-09-30T20:14:20.855+01:00thanks anthony...knowing you, you have probably wa...thanks anthony...knowing you, you have probably walked the damn thing<br /><br />Cheers William...and thanks for that i appreciate it<br /><br />cheers lordy..your comments are always a pleasure<br /><br />cheers N.Davies..great picture..really worked well<br /><br />hi caty...thanks for that..they did link well cheersMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-3748743188349718072010-09-30T15:07:59.317+01:002010-09-30T15:07:59.317+01:00Real emotional pain below the surface of the words...Real emotional pain below the surface of the words at what lost and what remembered. <a href="http://meawriter.wordpress.com/2010/09/28/and-binding-with-briars-our-joys-and-desires/" rel="nofollow">And binding with briars our joys and desires.</a> Hope your week goes well.John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-47027289092067655772010-09-30T13:29:55.749+01:002010-09-30T13:29:55.749+01:00Nicely written. I have a similar affinity for pier...Nicely written. I have a similar affinity for piers. - billBill Cookhttp://www.beginningpoetry.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-38769795139883847012010-09-30T10:51:55.871+01:002010-09-30T10:51:55.871+01:00Very vividly picturised and I could almost walk th...Very vividly picturised and I could almost walk the mile with the "Kiss" and wave the kid good bye... I loved the way you have captured the scene...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />I will great if you connect with me at Twitter @VerseEveryDay to read daily #FreeHaiku on love, life and longingShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-65264219385185118792010-09-30T00:42:54.734+01:002010-09-30T00:42:54.734+01:00The poem evokes history in a pace and flow that mo...The poem evokes history in a pace and flow that move along, as I'd imagine, the water in the Thames.<br /><br />I visited London last fall for the 2nd time in my life, and was loathe to leave it. It stands, to date, as one of the cities I've fallen in love with. I envy you this Pier.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-50463617026423171342010-09-30T00:33:14.239+01:002010-09-30T00:33:14.239+01:00Such rich history and your words recaptured this. ...Such rich history and your words recaptured this. I've never heard of this pier, but now I'm curious. Off to Google it...thanks for the history lesson!CMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15697762495151569561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1690603320508472274.post-74865746449705752752010-09-30T00:27:57.988+01:002010-09-30T00:27:57.988+01:00Very atmospheric....and reminds me of some of Word...Very atmospheric....and reminds me of some of Wordsworth. You are in excellent company then...LOL!<br /><br />Good cadence, good rhythm....and great imagery....flows very well.<br /><br />Good job!<br /><br />Best,<br />Lady Nyo (also known as Asobime...a very ancient Japanese word for whore..I think)Asobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.com